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  • Mood: Pride
  • Listening to: Nothing~
  • Reading: anything and everything
  • Watching: Beautiful World Ep. 5
  • Playing: Nothing~
  • Eating: Nothing~
  • Drinking: Nothing~
So yesterday for my DE English III class we had to write a poem. It could have either been based off of Carl Sandburg's "Chicago" or T. S. Elliot's "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock". So I am sitting at home thinking 'hmm, do I want to do a Love Song type poem or a poem about the city I live in?'. Well, I get to class today and, lo and behold, I am literally the ONLY one out of probably forty students who did the Love Song type poem. I didn't read it out loud for the class, but I decided that it was good enough to show all of you, so...

The Love Song of Francis L. Bonnefoy
L'amour est quelque chose qui ne devrait pas être imposée à d'autres
Let us go, you and I,
When the stars are in the sky
Like a painting by Van Gogh;
Let us walk the city streets,
Whistling a tune on the beats.
With you is where my heart lies,
And like the baby who cries,
I depend on you to know,
How much I love you so.

I see the way they look at me,
With their disgusted eyes.
And scowling faces,
But they don't understand,
The way you do.
So, I depend on you to know,
How much I love you so.

If you have not read the original by Elliot, then shame on you! Can you tell where I got my inspiration from? :iconfranceplz: :iconsexyfrance2plz: :iconsadfranceplz:


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Darklephise Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
Thankiu for the +fav!! Adorable Girl Anime Emoji (Kawaii Jump) [V6]
ForeverAHetaliaFan Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
Happy Birthday!
Merliniara Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist
:iconjack-frostplz: :iconfaveplz:
Lavi245 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I tagged you~
dejavil Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you so much for the fav :dance:
SicilyNotDenmark Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks for the fave bro!
CoffeeFate Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
Thanks for the fave! I'm glad you liked it.^^ -CFF
pentagram-wish Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
Thanks for the fave :D :hug: :+fav:
Chibitalia-Pasta Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Student
Thanks for the fave on my Flying Mint Bunny Shimeji! :3
ForeverAHetaliaFan Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
You've been tagged: [link]
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